"However, a good reason for this is that which of the earth's poles is which has switched every so often during geological time." Slater, P.J.B., Essentials of Animal Behaviour(1999), Cambridge, United Kingdom
Now does that sentence make ANY sense at all?? I do know what he's trying to get at here (the paragraph is about bird migration) but geez, the editor needs shooting. Many of the sentences I have to read a few times over to make any sense of them because it's so terribly written but the above example takes the cake.
Which is a pity because I like the topic of the book, and I was trying to get as much of the textbook read as I could before I started the unit. I am up to chapter 3 - page 39, which isn't too bad I guess.
Shud sleep soon so I can be all bright and bushy tailed for "summer school" tomorrow (yeah right!)
Just don't let me forget to wear covered shoes, in this weather I would so rather not, but I have labs.
Now does that sentence make ANY sense at all?? I do know what he's trying to get at here (the paragraph is about bird migration) but geez, the editor needs shooting. Many of the sentences I have to read a few times over to make any sense of them because it's so terribly written but the above example takes the cake.
Which is a pity because I like the topic of the book, and I was trying to get as much of the textbook read as I could before I started the unit. I am up to chapter 3 - page 39, which isn't too bad I guess.
Shud sleep soon so I can be all bright and bushy tailed for "summer school" tomorrow (yeah right!)
Just don't let me forget to wear covered shoes, in this weather I would so rather not, but I have labs.